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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to finish this? I'm dying to know what happens in the end
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ummm. Any chances of getting more chapters on this story any time soon? This is a totally fascinating look into someone with mental illness and what he does to the object of his obsession. It's unfortunately a bit too much like real life for me since I've got a sister who's a convicted serial stalker, and reading this makes me just as uncomfortable as I'm fascinated. If you are one of the authors on aff.net who use email update lists to notify your readers of updates to your stories, please add me to the mailing list for this story. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 21:
OMFG! what the hell is snape up to and why is he doing whatever he's doing!?!? he's trying to guilt trip harry. draco even seems better than sev. poor harry. off i go to read more, cheers
OMFG! what the hell is snape up to and why is he doing whatever he's doing!?!? he's trying to guilt trip harry. draco even seems better than sev. poor harry. off i go to read more, cheers
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 22:
oh. my. god. oh Harry *tear*. snape is so evil...i've never read a fic where he's like this. i'd rather be stuck with draco than snape at this point. please get harry away from him. please *runs off to read more*
oh. my. god. oh Harry *tear*. snape is so evil...i've never read a fic where he's like this. i'd rather be stuck with draco than snape at this point. please get harry away from him. please *runs off to read more*
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 23:
i've only read a few paragraphs of ch 23 and i already want to kill severus. hes using alcohol as an excuse!?!?! and telling harry that harry was the one that approached him the night before and god knows what else... *pulls out lots of torture devices...* . i hope he meets his death painfully.
but so far, im really enjoying this. you really manage to bring out the characters emotions, especially harry's. cheers
i've only read a few paragraphs of ch 23 and i already want to kill severus. hes using alcohol as an excuse!?!?! and telling harry that harry was the one that approached him the night before and god knows what else... *pulls out lots of torture devices...* . i hope he meets his death painfully.
but so far, im really enjoying this. you really manage to bring out the characters emotions, especially harry's. cheers
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 24:
they're all jerkfaces. all of them. none deserve to be in harry's company.
excellent job, cheers
they're all jerkfaces. all of them. none deserve to be in harry's company.
excellent job, cheers
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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, phooey. I ran out of chapters to read. D*mn this story is good. Bit twisted, but I like that sometimes. I'm very interested to see where you are going with this story from this point.
I do find some of Harry's conclusions under counselling to be bothersome. Encouraged to conclude that because he didn't reach out to the others he was wrong and should *correct* this and reconnect to his "friends". Considering the depth of betrayal by everyone around him why should he have to blame himself because he didn't go to people who had betrayed him so profoundly, so many times. Yes, Severus is sick and twisted, but the others aided and abetted him at every step of his destruction of Harry. Hermione's "solution" to the vow particularly nauseated me. She was so pleased that she found a way to negate the vow that Harry really meant, and made Harry take a vow that put him even more into Severus's power.
I am looking forward to seeing what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran{at}fastmail{dot}fm
I do find some of Harry's conclusions under counselling to be bothersome. Encouraged to conclude that because he didn't reach out to the others he was wrong and should *correct* this and reconnect to his "friends". Considering the depth of betrayal by everyone around him why should he have to blame himself because he didn't go to people who had betrayed him so profoundly, so many times. Yes, Severus is sick and twisted, but the others aided and abetted him at every step of his destruction of Harry. Hermione's "solution" to the vow particularly nauseated me. She was so pleased that she found a way to negate the vow that Harry really meant, and made Harry take a vow that put him even more into Severus's power.
I am looking forward to seeing what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran{at}fastmail{dot}fm
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful...
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very interesting. Oh so Snape does claim to love his husband, huh? I really think that is a twisted king of love. Keep at it. I cannot decide if I love it or if I am creeped out by this fic.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's getting to the end and I'm still confused. That's why I don't read mysteries because I hate not understanding what's going on or not knowing what's going to happen. But I just love your story too much to not keep reading. I truly can't wait for your next update, hopefully things will be cleared up. I'm still not completely clear on Snape's motives, other than maybe a sick obsession. And also the issue of the bond with Harry now. At least now, we have a clear idea of what happened with Voldemort, though going over this last chapter it seems like there was more to that too.
I can't imagine putting so much thought into a story where a lot of the facts and events seemed so twisted yet in the end you can see them all coming together, even to the last few words. Wow
And lastly before I end, I don't know if you want anon reviews or not but if you do there is now an option that allows you to enable anon reviews. It seems like many authors still haven't gotten the word that they can do this now, so I'm trying to spread the word to anyone who seems to have not gotten the notice.
I can't imagine putting so much thought into a story where a lot of the facts and events seemed so twisted yet in the end you can see them all coming together, even to the last few words. Wow
And lastly before I end, I don't know if you want anon reviews or not but if you do there is now an option that allows you to enable anon reviews. It seems like many authors still haven't gotten the word that they can do this now, so I'm trying to spread the word to anyone who seems to have not gotten the notice.