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for Jealousy

by brandnewdaydawning

person Anon
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh... I love this, it has so much potential. tres hawt. :P
person Jen
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story so far. Please please please keep updates quick!!!! Jennifer xxx
person Pongo
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love your writing style, and the idea behind your story is really good. The only problem... you need to update NOW!
person lysa1
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more. Now. I want more. Preferably today...or rather yesterday! *pouts*
What an intriguing story. Well written, clever ... a rather canon (except for the missing mudblod-hate - but then there would be no story..) Draco. Ron doesn\'t get it ... as usual - and I want mooore *wails*
person Know-It-All
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! I love the plot! Keep up the good work ^.^
person Mar
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is wonderful... You\'re a good writer, I was drawn into the story immediately. My favourite part was the flying scene; I really wished I was Hermione when I was reading that... I like it when Malfoy is all handsome and dangerous. Thanks for writing and please update soon!
person fiona
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
person Kat
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE>>>>>>>>>NOW!!!!!!!! I can\'t stand these stupid cliff-hangers you all insist upon writing, just get on with the story and refrain from taking such large breaks between chapters!!!!! GAH! I can\'t stand the tension!!!!!
person ~Sakurashope7~
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Review SOON!!! you are doing such a good job!!!! ^_^ Draco and Hermione forever!
person Lindsey
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to write more to this. I love it, it\'s perfect! Please write more, I love your storys

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