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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person mayu
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i was so happy when i first read this fic in the quiet ones , and then it was only 21 chapters and i was crazy to read more and one year later i found it here, 55 chapter !!!!!!! but only one new , and my happienes die when i read that is only one more chapter and there is not going to be a wedding in the story, or an engagement. why *crying* only one more chapter

i want to ask you the permission to translate your fic to spanish because i really love it but the end is sad , I WANT MORE after a year of wait, but well i cant do anything to change our decision can i ? because i would do it

well if you gime the permission to do the translation to spanish (obviously i will give you all the credit ) you can send me a email to

wiber_engel@hotmail.com

i love your fic
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person TNgirl
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you someday finish this story!! It's wonderful and I can't tell you how many times I've read it. I would also like to see a sequel telling us how things went after their graduation and with their lives together. Maybe someday.....
person Shar
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think "The Family Jewels" must be the best Harry Potter story I have read. Please keep writing.
person Lady K
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your story yesterday. It's official, I'm addicted! The story thus far is wonderfully written. I so appreciate the substance of the plot and the spice of the love scenes. I'm supposed to be studying organic chemistry (ick), but I just had to review. All my best.

K
person bhj
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oih
person Ladybird
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say that I am very much enjoying the development of this particular plot bunny.

I have, however, one criticism to make (I normally wouldn't bother, but this has been getting to me in some small, extremely petty way):

The Italian 'Sei cosi bella'. Sorry to be a pedant, but I am a languages graduate, and the second person singular conjugation of the Italian verb Essere - to be, is spelt S.E.I. not S.I.E. for example: Tu sei cosi tanto bella, mia carissima, amatissima Hermione...etc.etc.

Love and grammar related itchy fingers

Ladybird
person Exelon
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO! You just can't end it now! I've been reading it all the way and were so hooked up with it and then you break the news - no more stuff! I was so used to it, god damn it! OK, I'm not gonna cry my eyes out here, but there better be a sequel! With 50 chapters atleast! PLEASE!
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
beautiful story.
person Viviane v.C.
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey you! I read the first 17 chapters and I LOVE IT!! It

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