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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person mya
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah you need a sweet loving ending please. No drama or sad shit etc.... sweet, dramatic but loving sounds good to me. patiently waiting for more ~*~mya
person Chickenofpink
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet ending! Sweet ending! puh-leeeeeeease?
person .:+:. Sugar Sprite .:+:.
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW!!! *sigh* fluff is ADORABLE. Ron and Pansy are so cute together! In this story, anyways... any other and I might have to hurl. Anyways, great new chapter... can\'t wait for the rest!!

Until then,
Cheers :)
person kimibe
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* terribly addicting, cant help but love the fluff. i love this story thanks for the update, cant wait for the next one.
person Threesisters
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, wonderful chapter again, I love the way you\'ve made them your charecters.
Pans is smashing in your story, I really like her. Best wishes and thanks for another
great Update.
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter.
person Leli
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I would just adore a fluff ending. I\'m awarding myself two brownie points for knowing what this chapter would be about before I read it, and I loved it. I really enjoy how you tie everyone\'s emotions in, even if they\'re not the trio you\'re focusing on, it\'s perfect.
person kurtcouper
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree. You have 53 chapters. That\'s one very long novel. I would be sad if it ended in blue; one of Hermione\'s lover\'s dying or something. I\'m not sure, But I do love this fic, though I\'m not sure where it\'s going right now. Anyway, whatever you do with the end will be grand because you\'re a great writer. <3KC
person nat
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now i am only up2 the 12th chap and iam desperatly hoping that she is going to ditch blaise cause come on to get this story we go into h/dr so i dont want to be reading blaise,
and what is with hermione being a slut, man i dont think any one can be that skanky, i hope this story improves because if you can drag blaise,draco and skank hermione on for 53 chapters this story is going to get boring, fast.

now i also have to say that iam italian and even i think blaise talking in italian to hermione is corny

you need to spread your summary to include what is hapinin e.g. blaise hermione and draco cause \'draco gets a bit of his inheritance\' explains shit all!

nat
PS this is just my opinion so dont go thinking everyone hates it!
person Petalsoft
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the title of this chapter (Pop goes the Weasel). I have to admit that I thought it meant something else would be popping up on Ron. But now I see he\'s popped the question. LOL Well, I supposed both things happened. Great chapter and as far as the ending goes: I vote for B/H/D to have another round of fantastic sex with lots of lovey, dovey words and vows of forever together kind of thing. But that\'s just my opinion. LOL

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