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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Annie
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, well i like your writing better than the Anita Blake novels anyway lol. :)

i loved Draco\'s plan, i wonder what harry thought of it heh.

i love this story!
person Dreamweaver
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pure gold, I love the way Blaise and Draco react to eachother, not to mention the relationship between he and his Uncle Sev. It was a wonderful insight into how Draco was feeling. And I do like that Hermione is asking for him, it will be a bit eerie but as Draco said, Blaise does seem to hold the three of them together so well. :) Hermione isn\'t stupid, she\'ll know how much he loves her by how strong the protection was in the talisman. Whether you decide on a final battle scene (something I\'m certain you will excel at) or not, I shall love whatever you do (even though I don\'t want it to end). Look forward to seeing how everything rounds out. :)
person Petalsoft
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the way the necklace helped Hermione with Lucius. I say go ahead with a final battle. Since Snape made that comment to Narcissa about the end being near, it feels like you should. A nice way to end it, I think. And then the trio can live happily ever after.
person Angel Eyes
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome new chapter :) thanks so much!
person Leli
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to read the next chapter, what Hermione is feeling and all that. As far as a final battle goes, I say go for it!
person Petalsoft
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT! What a great sex scene and I loved thinking that Harry had heard them as well. Wonder if he\'ll comment about it. LOL Good job.
person Phantasia
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story. I really hope everything works out for them.
person Hanna Delacour
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting twist... I am curious how this will play out with lucius now loving Hermione. I hope Dumbledore has a few words about this. Can\'t wait for more. Fab as always.
person M
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco... very interesting turn of events...
person Mya
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the email... i bet we all can imagine was little harry was up to while the three had their fun... very enjoyable chapter...

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