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for The Family Jewels

by Mdunlap

person Angel Eyes
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve liked the past few chapters. I wish that the last one wasn\'t quite so short or quite so much about Ron and Pansy, but I really like this story a lot.
person bgard
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Ron get laid, seems to be the way to handle his anger management problem.
person Timberwolf06
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story but I could really live without the Draco/Blasie situation *if that is what you would call it?*
person TaichiKoi
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story. It has everything I need in a story. Wit, charm, humor, sex, plot and so much more. Please keep up the awesome work. I can not get enough of this. b^^d D/Hr/B has got to be my new favorite threesome now, thanks to you. Keep on writing!
person kazfeist
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In the words of Keira Knightley, \"Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely\". And, I appreciated the backstory in the previous chapter, as well. Keep up the good work....
person dragon34
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think anyone would be disappointed that you didn\'t mention the jewels. Although they are a focus of the story, but the chapter had all three of them, having sex, but still had the main characters, so I think it rocked.

I know how it feels, to have all your pre-written chapters up, and not thinking about what to write next.
Thanks for your help, you\'ve helped me out, more then you think.


Jeannette
person Anon
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could I be disappointed?
person Dreamweaver
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Their lovemaking is a story in itself, and a wonderful story at that. :) Just home from the pub and what a pleasant surprise to see some more wonderful story waiting for me. Damn, did Blaise really last that long? Now I am jealous. LOL
person Dreamweaver
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving the intrigue - the twists are just wonderful. I wonder what Lucy is up too? I love how calm Sev was when facing him, perhaps there\'s more influence showing in Draco from his teacher then from his father after all. Either way, have a feeling it\'s going to be an interesting game. And Ginny certainly worked herself into a fine mood, can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen there either. As for which direction to take your story, everything you\'re doing is more then fine with me so just go where your muses take you. :) I should reread HP too, only a few weeks to go until the big day. LOL
person seren
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say you put the kids in a cage and keep updating lol (joking) this fic could run forever and I\'d still read every posting and every chapter. I\'m so caught up to see what happens that I check for up dates several times daily. Keep up the story it\'s too riviting to stop now.

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