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good job please update soon

I love this story so far!! Can\'t wait for you to update!!!!!!! HOT

very nice indeed!
lol, that scene with draco and blaise both begging was hilarious, draco begging for something he didn\'t even know ^_^
i look forward to your next update (hopefully soon!)

(just answering anon\'s answer)
cara is sort of like a nickname, italian i think (?), males usually use it when refering to a woman.
i\'m sure theirs a much better explanation out their but thats all i could think of at the moment ^_^

A little confusing, but over all wonderful. I didn\'t quite understand if blaise and hermoine are a pair or if he was just playing her for the party. bah. I guess that means I must re read and see what i can see. anyways, its great, wonderfully worded and it sucks you right in.
much love
eddie

I like the story so far, especially the secret birthday party. You seem to be a bit confused about forms of address for people in the peerage, though. If Draco indeed has the courtesy title of Viscount (which means he\'d Be Viscount i.e. Viscount Ware, NOT Viscount Malfoy), when spoken to he would be called Lord (to stick with the previous example, Lord Ware or more informally as Ware) the first time in conversation followed by \"my lord.\" And when receiving formal correspondence (like the one Malfoy reads in chapter two), the salutation should\'ve read \"My Lord,\" instead of \"Viscount Malfoy.\"

His father wouldn\'t be called Lord Malfoy either but Lord , i.e. Lord Newton or more informally as Newton, a.k.a. The Earl of Newton (but not when speaking to him directly).

And to Anon: Cara can be interpreted as \"dear\" or \"beloved\" in Italian.

Sorry for the double post, but part of my previous post went missing and I want to clarify in case it doesn\'t make sense -_-

I like the story so far, especially the secret birthday party. You seem to be a bit confused about forms of address for people in the peerage, though. If Draco indeed has the courtesy title of Viscount (which means he\'d Be Viscount {insert title name here} i.e. Viscount Ware, NOT Viscount Malfoy), when spoken to he would be called Lord {insert title name here} (to stick with the previous example, Lord Ware or more informally as Ware) the first time in conversation followed by \"my lord.\" And when receiving formal correspondence (like the one Malfoy reads in chapter two), the salutation should\'ve read \"My Lord,\" instead of \"Viscount Malfoy.\"

His father wouldn\'t be called Lord Malfoy either but Lord {insert different title here}, i.e. Lord Newton or more informally as Newton, a.k.a. The Earl of Newton (but not when speaking to him directly).

And to Anon: Cara can be interpreted as \"dear\" or \"beloved\" in Italian.

I like the story so far!! I think the build up to the title \"Family Jewels\" is especially interestin ... esp with the allusions ... and the suspense

Very good start, I\'m intrigued. Is this going to be a D/Hr/B or a D/Hr? either way I\'ll love it because they are my OTT and OTP :D
I laughed when you got Blaise down on his hand\'s and knees and made Draco follow lol
And you have made a dominant Draco *sigh* I love the way Draco seems to rule over everyone
I also like how Draco doesn\'t seem to hate Hermione, that should lead to some very interesting situations.
Excellent start and I do hope you update soon because I\'m dying to know what his inheritance is, my curiosity is peeked!

Cat xxx

I\'m horriably curious about what in the world those jewels are. It\'s an interesting twist that Malfoy isn\'t talking to his mother, I don\'t think I\'ve seen that before. It\'s sad that he\'s all alone.
I really like Malfoy\'s title. As high and mighty as his family is it stands to reason that they would have some official status. Also, the misunderstanding at the end, launching Draco into a seduction
of Hermione Granger is brilliant. Please update soon.

Rain