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for Into The Light

by Helbling

person firewall
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good to see y0u back! Another good chapter. Umbridge just couldn\'t keep her nose out of their business could she? You nailed her beautifully. Just one comment...you refer to Hermione\'s dad as Bill one time and Philip another. You may wish to change one. Just a little thing but I noticed it. Update soon!
person Jo
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this story is progressing, thank you for writing it!
person Katie K
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEE! *happy dance* Grrr stupid Umbridge, I hate her! Please update sooon and feed my addiction to this story!
person Bambu
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, he used the \'C\' word. Boy was Snape infuriated, and rightly so. Excellent chapter, as always. My favorite part was the brief interaction between Minerva and Snape: \"But, that\'s illegal!\" \"That\'s Umbridge\" \"Right, fair point...\" Just fabulous! I think I cheered for Minerva.
person Snapelover11
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really a wonderful story. I read it all in one sitting, and loved every minute of it. Thank you for taking the time to write such a wonderful piece. Great work!
person Alauralen
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I can wait to see what trouble Severus makes for Umbridge!! That bitch deserves it!! Very well written chapter. I like how you have Hermione is progressing and I feel so bad for her parents! Please update soon, you are doing a great job!

Alauralen
person Aurora
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated, YAY!!!! I loved this chapter, especially the Umbridge Snape scenes. Can\'t wait to read more, keep up the wonderful work!
person JTBJAB
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! What a sweet ending! AND GO GRANGERS!!! Lol! But what a bitch Umbridge is! I liked how Severus kicked her out... even though it had upset Hermione! Please update soon!
person June W
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 11 - thank you for updating!!!! Great chapter - I\'m so glad her parents finally got the chance to see her, and how clever her mother was to avoid Umbridge like that. Wonderful use of the Weasley Twins to let them loose on Umbridge. And I enjoyed seeing Professor McGonagall \"bend\" the rules with the flying carpet. Still, that\'s a lot of effort everyone is putting in to avoid Umbridge, so I hope Severus is able to get rid of that awful witch once and for all with this last bit. I did wonder why Hermione is so afraid of Umbridge - was Umbridge a visitor to the Malfoy Manor, or a closet Death Eater? I think it might be too soon to talk about Ron\'s death with her, if she is still afraid of things, but I do like the way Severus is still willing to cuddle up with her.
person Genevieve
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh! I like this ^__^ Please update more!!
I\'m not very good at reviewing, but I think you rock.

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