schedule
May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! Bad Boy Harry is sexy! Update soon
schedule
May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Verra interesting so far. Just one thing: could you pay a little more attention to the grammar? If you\'ve got Word, just tell it to the a grammar check, and it\'ll pick up on most of the pesky little mistakes. I like how you\'ve paired Harry with Crabbe and Goyle, and Draco with Ron and Hermione. Great fun!
schedule
May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I relly like your idea for the story. \"Breakfast Club\" was part of your inspiration? :-)
Can\'t wait to see what happens next!
Just one tiny critique - you keep using present tense when it\'s suppored to be past tense. Just use past tense through the whole text.
Or, if you want, I can beta the whole time issue before you post the chapters.
Can\'t wait to see what happens next!
Just one tiny critique - you keep using present tense when it\'s suppored to be past tense. Just use past tense through the whole text.
Or, if you want, I can beta the whole time issue before you post the chapters.
schedule
May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wait, howd he know the name?
anyways, cool chappie. ^_^
anyways, cool chappie. ^_^
schedule
May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait when harry and draco meet each other. have more soon please!
schedule
May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it!!!
schedule
May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yays you updated!!!...ive been waiting =D nice chapter...could have been longer though =P lols just kidding..well it could have but i dont mind...argh you no what i mean...anyways great chapter loved it...lol Harry scarying Draco =D..wellupdate soon *hugs*
schedule
May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update. i got a bit confused. i thought harry did not know draco\'s name, but apparently he did. why to ask crabbe and goyle then?
schedule
May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! This story could (and most likly will be) so good. I hope that you update soon. I was hooked at the summary; (That\'s kinda sad when you think about it). Well, I sicerely hope that you update soon. ;)
schedule
May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Harry sounds like something i would say to my teachers !!!!!!!!! its awesome