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by Kaspjo

person Akasha
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...such a sad ending, but it seemed to fit quite well. Patiently awaiting your next update (but not TOO patiently...)
person Liadyn Malfoy
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This was really good, and that says a lot coming from me! lol! I am so critical it's not even funny. I kept seeing this one pop up, but always pushed it aside, thinking it wouldn't be good because it's football...don't get me wrong I love football, it's just that most people attempt to work sports into their fiction and really have no idea about any of it . They like to play but don't know all the rules and regulations. I'm glad to say that you know what your doing. It was a wonderful mix of everything that makes a story great. You've managed to tie together high school life, football, love, and the loss of a loved one with a high level of success! KUDOS!!! Keep up the good work!
person sandy
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a sad chapter. Good but sad. One of my managers at work just last her mom an tues. I have another office person who grandmother who is on the border line of dieing if not aready die on wed or thur. I have asst. manger is very bad shape he is not experted to live very much longer. This chapter really hits home. I hope to read more in the furture.
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At least they had that little time together. Things were fixed! Can't wait for chapter 30!
person dyanna
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i laughed, i cried.. i love the work!
person Sahira
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sniff...sniff...Update...sniff.
person volume
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want know if people find out about harry
person Akasha
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love that Harry and Draco's relationship is working out, even though it's a bit strained due to school, and football. I'm looking forward to more updates. ^_^
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like a break up in the works. If Draco is found out no one will want him. *sigh* So what happens next? Need chapter 29!
person Cat
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very, very good story please continue it and write more like it.

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