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for After The War

by Fawkesflames

schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
About the grammatical errors: I haven\'t installed word on my home pc (As it\'s still kinda new and I can\'t find my discs for Microsoft Office) so I\'m using Notepad which is pretty much the equivalent of crap. Sorry if it\'s distracting, I\'m not very good with grammar but I promise that I really am trying. Notepad has no spell check or grammar check so bare with me please. I\'m glad you guys like the fic and I\'ll be updating soon, maybe even today if I can find a spare hour or so. The next chapter will likely be a bit longer as I\'ve teased you guys with a few shorter chapters now. We\'re getting into the good stuff!! Keep reading and thanks for the reviews!!!!
person Hope
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing if you stop now I will be sorely dissapointed, please update soon.
person SteffieSnape
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4 - AHHHHHHH! Why did you HAVE to stop there! OY! Awwwwwww poor Snapey! hehehehehehe! I love how Viktor was used as a bait to make him jealous! Muahahahahaha! *sigh* Snape is just too delicious. I love this story! I hope you update soon! Toodles!
person JTBJAB
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bless!!!!!
person Moi
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The author of her only book should be Borden Spotless. Say it out loud.
person Moi
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought you\'d given up. Bring out another chapter! I can\'t wait to see what happens next!
person snapescat
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGHHHHHHHHHHH. How can you stop there! A VERY evil cliffie. Please wake them up now, and update soon.
person thisisayellow
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, the situation in which it takes place and the direction in which it\'s headed. You should update soon. One little thing, though - you should proofread/edit more carefully, as some of your grammatical errors are distracting. A very good idea, and mostly well-done. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!
person Rei
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic turned out to be a lot better than I anticipated based on the summary. Perhaps you should rework the summary to better fit your story?
person The Heavenly
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! This is a great HG/SS fic! Please continue, I so want to see more. *laughs* The last part where Severus walked in on Hermione was a lot more funny than it was supposed to be for some reason... Please update soon - it would be a waste if you didn\'t.

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