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by harriet

schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...hmm.. lets see. The man in the cottage is Severus Snape, OR it could be Lucius Malfoy...but no, definatly snape.

And how are they going to have glorious sex if snape is sick...*whines* Panicks*
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh yay! Loved those 2 chapters, sneaky-sneaky Harry, lol.

\"What did Ron know? Why didn\'t he tell Harry? Who is actually in the cottage? Is it Snape? And what exactly is Malfoy hiding?\"

I wonder if maybe Ron either knows that Draco had Snape, or he knows what is wrong with Snape and doesnt want to tell Harry. I do wonder though, why Severus wouldnt want to see Harry. I mean, he did help him. Ooh! I wonder if the part that Harry cant remember about the end of the war, when he was with Snape, was when Snape was cursed. Like, maybe Voldemort tried to curse Harry with whatever it is, and Snape interfered or something, and now he doesnt want to face Harry? I dont know.

Love the fic! Cant wait to read more in the upcoming chapters! Love it! - Jessica

person Kaitlin
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is this just Harry searching for answers and a lost friend....or are you going to turn this into a relationship story. Either way the story is good, I wonder what is wrong with Severus and if its curable or not. Does he really not want to see Harry? Are Draco intentions good? And what does the ministry want with Severus?
person Moi
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued. I think you are very brave, writing a mystery without any clear idea of where it ends. But yes, intrigued.
person antipyro
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for clearing up the time frame situation. Must be a bugger keeping track of it.

Loved these chapters, it\'s starting to explain a lot. One constant, don\'t ever trust Malfoy. lol

I also thought why Draco didn\'t have the house elves make his dinner for him every day, but nice recovery. The Draco story is plausible, but we all know he\'s up to no good, somehow....

O.k. as for the questions you posed:
1. Ron, being an Auror, should have known that they had investigated the manor/bush thingy. But, maybe, since they knew Ron was close to Harry, like sleeping in the same bed even, *snorts*, that they didn\'t include him in this assignment, or at least kept it from him.
2. See above for why he didn\'t tell him, i.e. he didn\'t know himself.
3. You\'ve identified Snape\'s voice as being recognized by Harry. Snape\'s in the cottage, or at least a twin/double/brother/etc.????
4. We\'d all like to believe that this is Snape and Harry has found him. You can drop the suspense, unless your muse kicks back into life.
5. Malfoy is hiding Snape\'s illness/curse. Ah, but who put the curse on him in the first place. Maybe Malfoy is keeping Snape alive for another purpose. Blackmail/Bribery/A trap for Harry?
6. I know there isn\'t a sixth question, but I\'d like to know what\'s in the bush that appears to be watching anybody who comes near. Can Snape see through this presence? Can Draco? Draco was pretty available when his house elf went to fetch him.

It appears that Draco won\'t sell the broken down manor. I\'m guessing it has magical properties that help keep Snape alive. Why keep him alive?????....also a good question for your muse.

I love how your stories intwine themselves and spiral into another region of being. Wow, is that deep? lol Just let\'s say, I love your writing, muse or not. Just keep posting. I don\'t watch t.v., and wait for your posts to show up here. I get giddy when I see your update or even, dare I say it, a new story. Please reconsider repriving (sp?) your last story. You are my escape and I deeply thank you for it. No, I\'m not desperate, just close to it.
person Hambares
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope your muse lets you back in soon! It is a great story. Keep it coming! I hope Harry gets to meet up with Severus soon.
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its perfectly fine about you always bringing Sirus back to us. *sniff*

WHY did he have to DIE!

Im sure our loverly Mr. Malfoy has some dirty tricks up his sleeve. mmmmmhhhm *giggle*

Thanks for the 3 ch update. Can always count on you! This may seem silly, but did you leave Australia because of the new anti fan fic laws? Cuase if so, you are way hardcore. Id do alot for my love of HP...but leave my beloved country...geeze thats a tuffy.

Great chapters! As always, you rock, you are my goddess, i bow before you, ohhh mighty Snarry Queen.
*smooch*
FairyPoet
person Raffy_Gal
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely love this story, like all of your others. how can u leave it at this pont, noooo - must write more!!! :P hehe, ron\'s in for it now *evil smirk*
person Hambares
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You may have lost your marbles, but I love your muse! Keep it coming!
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh three chapters at once, I love it! lol. So is Snapey in that creepy old house behind the hedges or something? I wonder.... i dunno. I look forward to finding out though, and I think Malfoys a big fat liar. I think he knows where our Snapey poo is and he\'s just not telling. lol

Love it! - Jessica

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