rate_review Reviews

Okay, yes I\'m hooked. Keep \'em coming, mate!

Oh yeah! I really like this one!, even if I am a big fan of yours.

Starting it off really nice and slow, bringing into the fold more of the characters and some of the expected plot. Just love your style.

I noticed that the first chapter seemed out of sync. When do you place Harry\'s birthday? Not in July, as it was cold outside.

still on the same day, the second chapter made reference to Harry at the bar on the first day of Hogwarts School - September??? and

I think there was one other reference to a \'time shift\'. Not a problem for me, but you may want to change it to a cooler late summer day or something. NOT A FLAME, I LOVE YOU!!!!!

but I really love the candy descriptions, so cute, Harry hated the green ones! lol

Seamus is a GHOST????

Awwww, Harry is going to look for Severus, Geez, I wish they find each other and fall in love. WHAT???! Oh, yea, YOUR STORY!!!!!

Sorry, continue on and don\'t get sick from too many sugar sweets and gum. Oh, an post often, the first 5 chapters were just great!!!!!!

Thanx for the three chapter update! That was great! Five chapters in and I am hooked. Can\'t wait to see what happens next. Wonder how Draco will react to Harry and his request?

Brilliant chapters, thank you.
One question answered Ron\'s just a good friend and with Hermione.
Picked up something, Whats wrong with Snapes hands, that\'s worrying
he always loved Potions, with damage to his hands would he be able
to brew, or am I finding plots within plots.
Hope you\'re feeling better, I noticed you sometimes slip in poetry in your
stories, do you write poems? be great if one could be included in a story.
Best wishes to a really good writer.

Did i ever tell you, you are my favorite Snarry writer? Well you are. I worship the ground you walk on. Hurray for another snarry story!

Can\'t wait to see where your creativity takes this one! More please...

Ooh I really like this fic. It is kinda wierd though, how Harry and Ron share a bed. I know Rons seeing Hermione, so is it like to comfort Harry with his nightmares and stuff?

Love it! Cant wait to see some more of it soon

An interesting start. Have to wonder at Harry and Ron sharing a bed - friends, room mates, lovers? I love the thought of Luna being Harry\'s boss! I have to say that I\'m sorry you took down the other story. It had a great start, and looked to be very promising. You\'ve had lots of great reviews for stories like Where Others Fear to Tread, and I hate to see you stop posting because of idiots. Maybe you\'d think about posting it at one of the groups where only members have access,like SnapexHarryML or After Class. You\'d still have an audience of ~4000 people, and there seems to be much less undeserved obnoxious reviewing done there. I\'d love to know if you decide to continue on with it, because your writing is good, with interesting characters and plots.

Hey Riffraff, I love this one!! Cant wait to see some more. Are you gonna post the other fic up on any other site, or is it gone forever?

Love it so far! - Jessica

I do like this. It\'s getting pretty interesting. Please, do keep going. I\'d love to see how our Potions Master turned out. Is he going to look like shit? Or did he keep up his apperances? Hopefully Draco won\'t be such a prat. :)