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for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

by ShilohDarke

person Sorceress Black (not signed in, last review was under Shannon)
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn that Lucius sure is thoughtful, if he\'s like that now I can\'t wait til he comes out of his shell lol. Looking good its good to finally see some interaction between the two. I just love this pairing its one of my favorites and I cant wait to read more. Sorry it took me FOREVER to review, please continue with this story!!! I shall return.
*~*~*Shannon*~*~*
person kbluesmom
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff! Although I can\'t imagine that soap being sold at your average Walmart, it would be a best seller! Especially to the singles! LOL..Great chappies! Looking forward to the next ones.
person LadyMalfoy730
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story... It\'s a great idea and very original. You\'re a very talented writer. I hope you update soon b.c i can\'t wait to see what happens!!! Quick question though: Are Lucius\'s looks based on that of Jason Isaacs in the HP movie???
person Shannon
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I\'d like to be his guest!! You think Bath and Body Works carries that stuff, hmmmm??? hehe. Well it looks like your making excellent progress, the story is coming along very nicely. I can see the similarities and I am really liking it, it has its own flavor but with that undertone of the beauty and the beast. Did that just make sense? Ahh hell I\'m tired. OK so before I start rambling on with loads of nonsense I just want to say that you are doing a wonderful job and so far this fic is Assolutamente favoloso!!!! OK I must stop now I am throwing in Italian so I must be a little off right now, hehe Update soon for I shall return for more. Oh ya and thanks for alerting me to the update if you would do that again that would be wonderful!!! Thanks! :)
person Chloe
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this story i cannot wait till the next chapter. You know i was reading the first chapter yesturday then the second one just now when i reached the end of the second one i was so bummed knowing there was not another chapter but then i noticed it said \"click to view next chapter\" i was suprised and then i found that you just added one and well anyways to make a quit long story short I LOVED IT! I so want your muse to find you again and make you write. Well good luck and keep up the good work.

Chloe
person RandH4ever
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should change \"Harmony\" to a different name. \"Hermione\" and \"Harmony\" are too close, namewise.
person dragon34
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is so romantic, I love it. It almost reminds me of Phantom of the Opera, with the scared face, and the hiding in his own home. The soap and shampoo was a great idea, I wish I had some of that.
person Ms_black
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you\'ve got something there. Continue it can develop into a great story.
person Maggie
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES this is an idea worth pursuing. I think the idea is beautiful. The finding inner-good within the supposed \"evil\", not the rape and murder. Please update soon :-).
person LadyMalfoy730
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept. Update soon. i wanna see what happens!

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