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July 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I feel as if the tone of the story changed from the first chapters to these current chapters...., now it sounds like a horrible romance-comedy movie.
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please say you plan to continue this story, Please =)
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a fucking awesome chapter ... can't wait for the next one!
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm addicted... please put out more for poor fanfiction users... hee hee hee...
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story more than I thought i would. I hope you continue!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying your story. It is well written and fun to read. The relationship between Harry and Draco is well done and I like the subtle way you are melding their lives. Please update soon. I haven
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, Draco\'s trip into Harry\'s nightmare-turned-dream resulted in a toy for both of them? Interesting.
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more of a joke then an honor --- Since you\'re doing a comparison, the word is \"than\"; \"then\" is used for time.
Slytherine --- it\'s Slytherin
Pomphrey --- it\'s Mme. Pomfrey (www.hp-lexicon.org)
Need a bit more punctuation work; there are sentences that need commas to make them clearer.
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more of a joke then an honor --- Since you\'re doing a comparison, the word is \"than\"; \"then\" is used for time.
Slytherine --- it\'s Slytherin
Pomphrey --- it\'s Mme. Pomfrey (www.hp-lexicon.org)
Need a bit more punctuation work; there are sentences that need commas to make them clearer.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is rather interesting. I want to get to the DxH, but you unlike so many others actually have a plot! I praise you for that alone.
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooohh bad boy draco getting answers out of harry when he couldn\'t really defend himself at least he didn\'t point blank say what he was...hummm i wonder when those two will start to actually notice they kinda like each other...looking forward to it. Squeals so glad u updated and as always i enjoyed it looking forward to more!
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They pulled the toys from the dream? How? Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 16!