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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Interesting plot twists, original characters, relationship development. Occasional amusing goof: "Harry knelt up comfortably on his back legs." [As opposed to his front legs? What is he, a horse?] Awful spelling detracts from the flow of the story. Free betas are offered all over the internet.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Severus not a dominant?! *wide eyes* Well.. I can live with it. Good story.
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story. Enjoyed it greatly. Lots of good
storyline and angst and humor a bit.fun fun!!!
storyline and angst and humor a bit.fun fun!!!
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I found this story very enjoyable. Not quite as exciting as some of your other work, especially in the second half, but satisfying and complete. Good job!
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story! I'm a sucker for correcting mistakes but I won't get into that. I really like your stories, this is the 3rd one I read. Nice ending, sweet but without disgusting mushiness. Good luck with your other stories.
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head* I will never look at Remus Lupin the same way again.....
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok I need to come up with another comment except that's so sweet...but really, it's so true!
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I totally LOVED this story! So amazing. And, I've got to say...I really dug the fact that Harry ended up being the top. lol. I wasn't expecting that at all, but I think it worked perfectly. Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. just read the whole story! congratulations, it was just soo good (didn
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
snape bottoming?
now thats HOTT
each suspense really hooks me into the story
i can't stop reading lol
cuz of you, i'm not fond of dumbledore at all... darn you lol
but who cares, snape n harry is more than enough for me hehe
oxoxo
now thats HOTT
each suspense really hooks me into the story
i can't stop reading lol
cuz of you, i'm not fond of dumbledore at all... darn you lol
but who cares, snape n harry is more than enough for me hehe
oxoxo