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person Emily
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy reading Hols. The story comes to life so well, I love it , I love it. I also enjoy LJ stories as well.

I would love to see Sev and Max get together and sing. Have an open mike nite at Cutty's...

Keep up the fantastic work and thank you for taking the time to write this story.

Emily
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No need to be nervous about the latest chapter! Wonderful as always! For me your OCs are every bit as real and important as Harry and Severus. It's nice to see a bit more of them all! I think you could keep writing forever and I'd keep reading with interest; there are so many characters and their stories to explore in this universe you've created. I definitely liked the 'family Sunday', I'm still smiling now.
person Hambares
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Someone please give Harry some of the darn biscuits!
person Bakurah
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw cute^_^
I like how you focused on Damon and Grant.
Heh Harry really wanted them biscuits
person girlfrommars
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved this newest chapter.. i really like seeing sides to the other couples =)

Definitly cant wait for more.. i do love this story =)
person antipyro
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was pure memory stuff!!! Ah, yes, the ups and downs of family life make it all worthwhile.

I don't mind the change in tactics and although I haven't read the LJ on the back stories, this is a nice touch. It gets me more into the characters as you see them.

Wonderful entry, thank you.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. I didn't mind this chapter at all. It still had bits of Harry and Sev in it. And Grant and Damon are just too cute. I liked it.
person nightangel
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I found the story to very interestiong. I noticed that you had some other terms that where not in the HP books. I was also wondering if you are a witch at all because of the terms you used? Keep it coming I would like to see if they are happy. What about the Malfoys?
person NightOwl
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, it was nice to learn about harry fathers -in- law, it is really good please update soon.
person holli
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh, that was the cutest chapter ever!! i loved when damon buttered up the biscuits and set them in front of harry and kissed the top eof his head. and then end with the swimming was also soo soo cute. i ofcourse prefer chapters that are sev and harry centric, but as long as they are present, i like getting to know the other characters as well. you write grant and damon's love se well. they really do seem like a couple that has been together and in love for many many years.
keep up the great work! as always i eagerly anticipate more!

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