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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more is demanded
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I request more. :)
brilliant story.
a bit straining on reality, considering hermiones change of view in the middle.
maybe you could have included a bit more about the \"snap\" in her mind. but as i cant seem to think of something that would have been appropriate at that point i think thats just the problem.
I would love to see the reactions of the others (especially ron)
please write more.
brilliant story.
a bit straining on reality, considering hermiones change of view in the middle.
maybe you could have included a bit more about the \"snap\" in her mind. but as i cant seem to think of something that would have been appropriate at that point i think thats just the problem.
I would love to see the reactions of the others (especially ron)
please write more.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes, MORE!!
Very good and so many loose ends. It demands a sequel. Please do write it!
Very good and so many loose ends. It demands a sequel. Please do write it!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I hope that Harry and Hermione will be together forever, as they are ment to be. While I doubt something this graphic will happen in the book, I hope JKR decides to have them get together too, if not on the same level. I hope Mrs. Weasly didn\'t chew them out too bad ^_^ Keep writing, MORE HARRY/HERMIONE!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I request more! I\'ve been waiting for a really good Harry/Hermione fic, and this one has a great plot and great writing!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know if you know this, but your story, when saved as a .doc file, turns out to be 69KB. A very appropriate number for a lemon. Keep up the good work, hopefully you can add a few more chapters, of how they take their relationship and such. Update soon.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I dont know what else to say. Write more it was so good I read it like 8 times. Ok, I\'m calm. Just as a suggestion write about the baby that Harry and Hermione could have. I think that would be very interesting to read about. ;)!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your stil. The start was not so funny, because I hate the idea of R/HR, but the rest was great! I demand more ;)
You have to write more, because I want to know, if Hermione gets pregnant und what Ron will say to all of this! You should write a full novel length fanfic! I want to know, what\'s the glowing was and how Harry will kill Voldemort.
Keep up the good work!
You have to write more, because I want to know, if Hermione gets pregnant und what Ron will say to all of this! You should write a full novel length fanfic! I want to know, what\'s the glowing was and how Harry will kill Voldemort.
Keep up the good work!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue this one... It\'s great. I find most of my HP/HG stories on portkey but I thought I would look here and I\'m glad I did. Great story.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story and i hope you continue it.