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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am very pleased with this fic. However, I am seriously disliking Hermione at this point. I can\'t believe that you had her slap Harry for such a triviality! That was a bit too OOC for me. Other than various grammatical and spelling errors, I applaud the detail and expressiveness of your diction even though some phrases are repeated more than their novelty warrants. The story is moving smoothly and I am very eager for the next chapter. Please don\'t keep us waiting!
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more! i wanna read more!
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you ... damn ... cliff ... want ... continue ... PLEASE!
great chapter and by the way, i really like this story.
dancing_monkey
great chapter and by the way, i really like this story.
dancing_monkey
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Good chapter.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that\'s an evil ending! i went to click on the next chapter and realized there wasn\'t one yet. that\'s mean! of course, it shows how much i love this story since i can\'t wait to read more. *hands plate of chocolate cookies over* now go write more!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG you just HAd to leave it there didn\'t you?! I hope you post the next chappie soon I can\'t wait to see what happens next!
schedule
September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT
perfect build up for the next chapter.
I can\'t wait for the next chapter because i want to see how this goes.
Keep writing because its gooing really well and has the potential to go very far. I can\'t wait to see what and how this continues. Keep up the EXCELLENT work!!
perfect build up for the next chapter.
I can\'t wait for the next chapter because i want to see how this goes.
Keep writing because its gooing really well and has the potential to go very far. I can\'t wait to see what and how this continues. Keep up the EXCELLENT work!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how exciting. I was waiting for the attack!!! Well update soon!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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OH MY GOD!!! HURRY UP, I NEED ME SOME MORE HARRY POTTER CRACK!!!
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OH MY GOD!!! HURRY UP, I NEED ME SOME MORE HARRY POTTER CRACK!!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely bloody fantastic i cant wait for the rest.