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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Absolutely great. I adore your writing.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* I\'d loke to see Lucius fainting. Love your story ;)
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful, lovely. Kudos to you!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I am in total AWE of your talent. You are seriously one of the best writers that I have come across and it\'s truly amazing how you can capture all the emotions, and realistc views in your words. I can truly say, you have a HUGE fan here!! All the best and hurry with your other story..
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I\'d really love to see it turned into something on going or at least to see a sequel. Maybe something set farther on into the relationship. Keep it up and I\'ll keep reading.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahha
I lovethat only a mother knows ... yeah narcissa crack that whip ...hahha
I lovethat only a mother knows ... yeah narcissa crack that whip ...hahha
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic has grabed my intrest. i truly enjoy an original story and this fits the bill, i do hope you build off of it prehaps\"Manipulations of a Pure Blood Debutant\" after all if DM and HG are going to get to gether i am sure Narsissa will have something to do with it. ........wonderful job
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i forgot It is so nice to see a strong Narssisa. I most often see her depicted as a weak abused and sheepish woman. Bravo
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was intriguing. All the little nuances that Narcissa noticed, it really seemed like the characters and responses were real. I loved how Narcissa seems to have a strong backbone with Lucius. And his reaction was priceless.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Go, Narcissa! Tell Lucius how it\'s gonna be!!! LOL Very funny, romantic too.