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person Elmo
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God i love the ending! its so cool that she stands up to him...there isn\'t enough of that in fics! plz tell me u have a sequel planned
person morgana
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo Bravo. That was excellent. I can only hope there will be more, even if they are only one-shots like this.
person kella
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am in love with you for writing that.
honestly.
person jes
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was wonderful and i believe it deserves to be fully developed into a story, but if you decide not to thats ok too, it\'s amazing. loved it.
person Ryo
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL Very nice ending! (Oh, and the rest of it was good, too. It\'s refreshing to see Narcissa in a different light)
person Jess
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE! I love how Narcissa is so intuned with her son, that they have a good bond. And the description of Draco and Hermione was great too. I loved the last line and Lucius\'s reaction. Great one-shot! =)
person Kristina Malfoy
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
person robin777
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really great. I loved seeing Draco from Narcissa\'s POV. I also loved how the mother\'s noticed what everyone else failed to notice. I loved the ending how Narcissa put Lucius in his place.
person Bea
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I rarely reply to anything b/c I\'m lazy, but I LOVED it! You have to do a sequel. Please? And I love Lucius fainting btw.
person Amy
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey.....I really enjoy this story.....is it a one-shot? or is there going to be a sequel? or other chapters? I hoep so....i luv the thought that Draco is enamored of Hermione like that and Narcissa approves like that...lol....i hate lowly evil Narcissa i like strong independent Narcissa....I hope you decide to continue witht his but if you dont know that this is a very good story.....

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