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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I'm so looking forward to how Sev and Harry's relationship will go. I wonder when Sev is going to admit he loves Harry *hint* *hint*
Looking forward to your next update on this
Looking forward to your next update on this
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really liked the sex part, both times * lol * It was very well presented.
I\'m not sure if there\'s a plot to this story, who cares anyways?, but it would make the story more plausible if there were.
Your writing is good, but I\'ve noticed some typo errors like; \'check\' instead of \'cheek\' and \'knell\' instead of \'kneel\'. You may want to review these or get a Beta. It really doesn\'t detract from what\'s going on, anyone can make it out quite well.
Can\'t wait for the next installment, I know it\'ll get even better.
I\'m not sure if there\'s a plot to this story, who cares anyways?, but it would make the story more plausible if there were.
Your writing is good, but I\'ve noticed some typo errors like; \'check\' instead of \'cheek\' and \'knell\' instead of \'kneel\'. You may want to review these or get a Beta. It really doesn\'t detract from what\'s going on, anyone can make it out quite well.
Can\'t wait for the next installment, I know it\'ll get even better.