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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think harry is being a jerk towards draco. i think seeing harry\'s pov every so often would be nice but for the most part i think you should stick with draco\'s pov.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your english really isn\'t that i\'ve seen worse from people who probably speak only english, but anyway, please continue this fanfic really shows promise and i want to know more
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. i loved that, it was so original. i definantly think you should continue with this story, and your english is probably better than mine, and i\'ve lived in the USA my whole life. *grin* i can\'t exactly tell you why, but i love your story.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your English seems fine! I can\'t wait for chapter 3! Why was Harry crying? What happened?
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please!!! write that third chapter! write the third chapter!!!!
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very empty review, but I just felt like saying that I really like the story and especially your way to write.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter Keep up the good work! can\'t wait for the next update!
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this fanfic is amazing. I wonder
what\'s wrong with Harry. Guess I\'ll
find out when you update *hint hint*
ok BAI!
what\'s wrong with Harry. Guess I\'ll
find out when you update *hint hint*
ok BAI!
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did very well even if your native language isn\'t english. Oh and scratch that question mark. This story IS to be continued.... I order you to write the sequel!!! :D