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for Devil\'s Snare

by ShoushiAme

person Ari
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with your opinions on Ron and Ginny. Snape is such a promising character (well until HBP but hopefully that will be explained away)
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O wow.. i started reading this fic a while back and i couldn't get into it.. then i thought.. hmmmm... why is that?? so i went back and read it over again.. and i found why.. you were just going over the preliminary's of the story. you know introducing and explaining.. so i said to my self 'Self, read the damn explanations and the reasons.. they are there for.' So i read and when i kept on reading i was like.. OOOOO this isn't half bad.. it's really interesting and noone has taking this approach before... at least in the ones i have read. Even though i am still confuse about the bet/wager between the kingdom of heaven and the kingdom of Hell.. i have come to understand that Harry is the Prince of Hell.. and yet he is the buffer between teh 2.. ARGH!!! at least that's what i think.. and once his Soul meshes he we'll be the Shiznit?? Am i right? or am i close? anyhoo.. could i get an email letting mew know when you update? Please. ying_faa@yahoo.com
person shadow
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is rather funny. I like it alot. You\'ve done a great job expressing the characters\' personalities. You\'re doing good so far even if it\'s your first fic on HP/SS. Please continue writing it. Hope to see more of this wonderful story.
person JaYJaY
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like it. It\'s not something I\'ve already seen before. Plz get the next chappy out. SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person JiyuHatellKodai
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heheh, I totally did not see this updated, so my apologies for reviewing so late. (Hey, anything past two days is late to me!)

I must admit, this is getting rather interesting. I\'m curious as to how this is going to move along (Which I believe I have said this before) but more specifically, in the relationship between not only Harry and Severus, but also Harry and Avenairu as well as Dessmona. (Also Avenairu and Severus... would that be considered a three way? Probably not, but that would be interesting if Avenairu had a way to astrally project himself while Harry was still conscious. Oh the sinfully delicious possibilities.)

Anyways, PLEASE write the next chapter soon. (Or type it up and send it to beta or whatever you do.) I really wanna see how this progresses.
person antipyro
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. It\'s soooo off-the-wall that it really has me hooked.

Please continue with your plot building, it will make the story and the Snarry sooooo much more worth it.

I know it\'s a scary thing, but I can\'t wait to see Harry\'s new power unleashed. *shudders*.

Great work, please post again when you can.
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh Lovely, wonderful update!

I love how you introduced Dessmona, gives a brilliant mental image of her. And Avenairu, oh Avenairu ... he does seem a tad scary, ha thats kinda funny, i mean he is a devil of course hes a tad scary. * snickers * God I\'m stupid sometimes ... anyway

I cannot wait for the next chapter, this is definitally one of my \'most interesed in\' fics at the moment, lol.

Love it! Please update soon .. - Jessica
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... interesting stroy. Can\'t wait for the Snarry-ness, buit I\'m patient... *hums a little tune* Anyway... wierd. I ususally don\'t like OCs... wonder if maybe Veelas are part angel or someting? :D Luverly, though, to get back on track... looks very promising, despite the ooc-ness of Draco.
person JiyuHatellKodai
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD Yay, the plot thickens.... I think. *sweat drop* Dude, Avenairu sounds like some creepy bird. Like a feathered bat. Very nice name. Where did Dessmone come from? I like how she acts too. People always think Angels are all nice and what not. Not always true. Angels do what they have to do to protect the world and its inhabitants.

So an Angel acting evil is not that odd of a thought to me.
person Tashia
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its good story...keep up the good work ^^\'

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