schedule
August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First they were in the water, then a bed, then back in the water. And she\'s his young daughter? And who is Mehree? Great smut, just a quick fix would take it to the next level.
schedule
August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
umm i dont usually reveiw the stories but you went totally off course then it startedin the pool and then all of a sudden they were in bed??!!!??!?!?! still good though:D:)
schedule
July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job. Very graphic. I like that.
schedule
July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story was very good, and I love the title XD. I think you should definatly continue it. Best of luck in future writings, SignedAngel.