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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Weellll then...that was a bit of fun, yes?
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
proving to be a bit sappy but still really good. only problem I see is harry has really bad grammar. almost a little too perfect, but you seem like a pretty good writer, I have a feeling it\'s not going to say this simple for long...? thanks for updating to quickly, this is a real gem
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two mistakes that I noticed (I\'m so sorry, I\'m a grammar/spelling nazi or something...): It\'s spelt McGonagall, not McGonnagal, and at one stage you say something like \"must of gotten\", but the correct way is \"must have gotten\"
Ok, now onto the non-nagging-about-spelling-and-grammar part of this review! That was soo good! I am loving this story! Please update soon! If you do, I\'ll give you cookies.... :-)
Ok, now onto the non-nagging-about-spelling-and-grammar part of this review! That was soo good! I am loving this story! Please update soon! If you do, I\'ll give you cookies.... :-)
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Don\'t end it there! *cries* Please oh PLEASE write more soon! =(
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to see how this pregnancy goes!
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad Harry is happy. This fic has some wonderful possibilities! Once again.....more please!!! Love it so far!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man this is really good. I like how you have harry not know instead of try to break the news to snape, harry breaking the news is so cliched. good so far I hope you update soon.
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was cute. Loved the last two lines, fainting Snappey is adorable. Happy Papas! Well, I dunno. I guess well have to wait and see what happens. Great start, was a lovely first chapter.
Cant wait for an update, Loved it! - Jessica
Cant wait for an update, Loved it! - Jessica
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I love this fic so far it\'s a great chapter and I do hope for you to continue I can\'t wait to see what happens next, I\'m sure it\'ll also be quite interesting. I never thought I would ever see Snape fainting from anything but that\'s a great way! I liked how you had it that Harry didn\'t even know he was pregnant and the way that Snape had to find out, but I feel sorry for Snape for being so worried that there was something wrong with Harry! Please update soon!!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh definately more please!