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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute story so far. Grammar needs some help. Please check your use of where (place) we're (contraction we are) and were ( past tense of are). I also noticed what I call dropped words-small words missing from sentences probably from thinking faster than typing. Did the fairy give him his worst day defiantly or definetly? Now that I think about it, perhaps it was defiant-against his wishes-lol Can't wait to read more.
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL "Wind-ease potion" hahahahaha
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up. Please go online and check out webistes re. homonyms-words that sound alike but have differnt spellings and meanings. Here/Hear Your/you're etc. Again, I couldn't decide if the comment about Neville deify the laws .. was a tongue in cheek mistake, or if you meant defy. The chase around the castle was hilarious. I couldn't help but think, "Run Forrest, Run" Um, I mean Severus.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have a lovely way of expressing yourself...so tongue-in-cheek. Very enjoyable. I hope you update soon.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far can't wait to read more. I guess everyone has the case of the badboy drama. Snape would be considered the badest boy of them all and to tell you the truth I wouldn't mind having him in my bed right now. Anyways you are doing great with the story and I can't wait to read more. Also Happy B-day Severus Snape.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is hysterical. Keep up the good work!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello hun... this is funny!! Are you gonna finish this up? Let me know.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hope you finish this, its so funny.