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for Serenity Abandoned, Passion Ignited

by thinkofme

person zane
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm still waiting here...

anyway, for some comments... is this a first-person PoV or do you have a narrator? just wondering.
person penniez
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you MUST update! =] it\'s getting interesting
person darkwhispering
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you update soon! Although I do admit that Draco seema a bit out-of-character. And do I detact a hint of unsaid something with Snape and Hermione? I reinterate- Pretty please with whipped cream(mmm) on top Update promptly!!
person penniez
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You definitely need to update! I love these types of stores....=]
person Eddie The Black Maru
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm...you had me scared there for a moment with the \'nightmare\'. I smell a snape attempt on our favorite witch....or does my nose fail me??? It was a good solid chapter, (the bubbles...PERFECT time for some bath play...hehehehehehehe....), I can\'t wait until the next one!!!!!! I give praise to those worthy. WORTHY. I loved the email, it was a very thoughtful gesture on your part, thank you.
Much love
Eddie
person dangerous-vixen
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re more than welcome! I\'m happy to see you updated and this chapter was some what \'different\' from what I thought would happen. Luckily, you held back on the sexual tension to make the story more believable and in character. Although, Draco is slightly ooc but hey after reading HBP *rolls eyes* characters aren\'t so ooc to me no more. Good job once again!
person Lavi
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I loved it and I was wondering if you could send me an email when you update? please, pretty please with sugar on top?
person Shauna
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a wonderful chapter. please write more
person RACHELLE
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOO!! I already told you my thoughts on this part. Its good, it really is! I\'m eager to find out exactly what you are going to do with Sevvy-kins! AHH did I just say that?? LOL.
person Kinnara
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* Who would\'ve thought? Draco and Hermione, I think it\'s one of those Shakespeare plays, \'Romeo and Juliet\', at least it seems that way to me! Plz, update soon! -^_^-

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