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kool fic

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good story =D

Hey Ak, I really like this story so far...and I have to say Smithy..gets some experience..making out lying down is very fun .. Some people are such prudes...why are they reading adult fic if it bothers them.. Ak i hope you don't let them bother you it's a good start! I would like to see where you go with this, also curious how draco and hermione come together in the first place.. I really hope you keep going...count me as a fan...redwiccan

lol at Smithy...

I think (s)he's just joking but obviously some people are just clueless. lols some more...

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Ok first of all, sex, oral and even anal im ok with, but making out lying down! You sick pervert! you should put a warning up for that! children could find this!! I was disgusted!
Secondly, where in the name of Merlin (see what i did there, talking at your level) did the cream and syrup come from? now i know they\'re witches and wizards but in the heat of passion could you even be bothered to get any? I know it made it horny and blah blah blah but they could have at least said a spell. I was going to be especially nice to you but the lying down and making out was really foul! I feel sick!

Ok first of all, sex, oral and even anal im ok with, but making out lying down! You sick pervert! you should put a warning up for that! children could find this!! I was disgusted!
Secondly, where in the name of Merlin (see what i did there, talking at your level) did the cream and syrup come from? now i know they\'re witches and wizards but in the heat of passion could you even be bothered to get any? I know it made it horny and blah blah blah but they could have at least said a spell. I was going to be especially nice to you but the lying down and making out was really foul! I feel sick!

And just so you know, i posted twice because i was so disgusted!

This fic is great!!!!!!
Update fast and email me when u do!!!!!!!