rate_review Reviews

so far your story is rather interesting, but i do wonder why it is posted on adult fan fiction rather than fanfiction.net
there isnt any sex or adult scenarioes so far and i would really like to see the next chapter.
actually i am looking foward to the sex scenes because that is what i come to aff.net to read.
i read normal fanfiction all the time and im sure i would have found this story sooner had it been posted on a more main stream site.
but please update soon

I left you a review before, but I just wanted to tell you how much I like your story. There are almost 4,000 fics on this site, and I have read almost half of them. What can I say, OC in my world means Obessive Compulsive. I know drivel when I see it, and this is a good story. You have an actual plot, dialogue, grammar and spelling. I was actually excited because I thought you had put up a new chapter. I\'ve had people criticize the way I write sex scenes (although I haven\'t been accused of sounding like I was 12), that my chapters are too short, that some of the characters get more sex than others (duh!), and that I don\'t know how to make pizza margaretta. It sounds like it\'s getting ridiculous, doesn\'t it?
You work hard on a story, and then someone says a really mean, uncalled for thing to you. Sorry, love. You get a big hug from me.

i love your story, a very good story.

please keep writing

too short....please keep writing more...I just love this story and can\'t get enough of it....hehe....-Cyn

your writing is atrocious. thank you for making my eyes bleed.

too short....no fair...I love this story......Harry and Ginny are my favorite.....hurry up with the next chappie .......which I hope is alerady underway...-Cyn

Yay! I have been waiting for new chapters. I was definently suprised when i saw that there was two new ones!! yay! Keep up the good work.

I loved this chapter and I do hope the smutt is coming really soon...-Cyn

pla write more...That was so cool how they both changed into birds but when will they change back?

I love Harry being so tiny.....he\'s soo cute...hehe......love the plot and it\'s so sweet that Harry and Ginny are soulmates....hehe....I\'m a sucker for happy endings and I hope this story will do just nicely....keep up the good work and I can\'t wait for the next chapter......I\'m just imagining Severus groveling for forgiveness to Serena.....hilarious....hehe...-Cyn