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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is a very good start. Chapter one is very short, but gives you enough information to get you hooked.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I like where this is going . [needs more sex] JK lol write more damn you ! ^^
oh yay that was a constructive review! I\'ll write a better one next chapter.
oh yay that was a constructive review! I\'ll write a better one next chapter.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey...Nice beginning. I\'ll be your beta if you want, dear. ^_^ If you want a look at my grammar go to the story under this pen name. If you judge my grammar good enough, just email stuff to the email I have provided. *huggles* I want to see where this is going.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well. much could be worked on. spelling, grammar and such. but all in all. i think it turned out not to bad so far. please continue. this story intrests me and i would like to see where you are going with it.