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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, I loved the chapter where Neville lost his virginity. I'm glad he lost it like that instead of to some tart that would laugh at his lack of experience. I can't wait to see how this pans out. Keep up the good work.
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still excelent! The sexscenes are very good, and the plot is beginning to grow, too. Not having read any of you other works, i must admit that i'm a bit worried over the multiple plotlines. It is a common mistake among writers to make to many plots, and then having trouble juggling them around, but i'm full of hope for this one :)
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good Job!!
Keep writing all your fics. I like WAWN also :)
Keep writing all your fics. I like WAWN also :)
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is hysterical! Out of character, of course, but that\'s the point... brilliant! I keep giggling to myself. I\'m off now to read the rest...
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what a great story. it's funny and thrilling and erotic. i was surprised by the level of plot in the fiction. i had thought it was just going to be plotless but i'm happy i was wrong. it's pretty funny to see all the boys trying to get mary sue for themselves, and her keep twisting them around her little finger. i look forward to more.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The Mary/Neville scene was rather tastefully done.
Kudos
Kudos
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story on a whim. I loathe Mary Sues and I thought.. ahh what the hell. As I clicked on Chapter 2, I did a complete double take at the author. I absolutely love What A Witch Needs and I'm not even a Het fan. lol As long as there's so Draco/Harry action in here somewhere, I'm happy. =)
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah i'm still reading this! i love all your fics... please continue this one!! oh and dont neglect sisters of the dark moon either... another of my faves
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You don't have to beg for reviews, honey. Your stories are fantastic and this chapter was brilliant as always. I love Mary Sue's lesson with Neville, you explained it beautifully. Bit of a worry what's going to go on between the Gryffindor and Slytherin boys. (Loved the bathroom scene with Blaise and Draco - jealous much). I dread to find out what might happen to Mary Sue if the Slytherns find out she's really a muggle.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still reading...still loving it...still wanting more...SOON please ;)