rate_review Reviews

Hey! This can turn out to be great! I like the plot, reminds me of another amazing fic. Anywyas, just a thought (PLEASE don;t take this negatively), the old english makes it hard to read and the flow becomes choppy. I know why you wrote like that, but just a request, maybe you could write in plain english. I think that you can suck your readers into the old world without the messed up sentence structure. Great fin and a great idea! Please post more soon.

ooh, very original. i really like this. have you read river god by any chance? the main character/hero was a very talented and intelligent harem slave as well, i was reminded of that book when cedric mentioned harry healing the wounded. Anyway, i can\'t wait to see where this is going. keep up the excellent writing. i\'m eagerly awaiting your next post.
moidy

That is an evil chapter ending!! There better be an update soon to make up for that cliffhanger! ~_O

Poor Harry! Everyone else is nobility and he\'s a harem slave who\'s also a mediwizard. Whose harem is he in? Does he belong to Gryffindor or Hufflepuff? Can\'t wait for chapter 2!