rate_review Reviews

this story is definitely one of the best! its so well written and just the whole plot is intriguing, unique, and perfect! i really like this story and i can\'t wait to read more!!

Still reading and still eagerly awaiting more chapters!
I\'m furious with Hermione though! As a woman I can understand what she did, but I also can\'t see why she would keep that from him for so very many years.

I\'m enjoying the story considerably, I love where I just get lost in the story and don\'t think about the writing at all. That said there are a few grammar/word usage issues which detract, for me (Mother was an English teacher and I taught Biology-I can\'t help it). Example: frpm the latest chapter \"the conversation was polite and perforator

OOOOOOOOh!!!
It\'s great? I even have no words to say anything......it\'s just....I don\'t know.... brilliant!!!! amazing!! wonderful!!!
Keep going, please....I want to read 11, 12, 13.... and other chapters.
Thank\'s a lot!

::squeals:: I don\'t know if I\'ve reviewed this or not, but I love it ^_^ it keeps getting better and better and I check every day (sometimes multiple times a day x.x) to see if you\'ve updated ^_^ you rock! keep it up and update soon!

Hello!
Very good story. I love the little boy allready!
Hope you update soon, perhaps you can send me an e-mail when there is a new chapter?!

Never one to disappoint I see! \'Nother great chapter- has me beggin\' for more! Update soon as possible! Happy writing, mi chicquita!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs and kisses!
Killer K ;)

I\'ve just caught up on your recent chapters... wow several of yours to only one of mine, I\'m a bit envious. In any event, it rather surprising how easily Hadrian has affected his Dad, and entirely charming. I quite liked your adult, more cynical Harry, and that Hermione keeps much of her feelings to herself, even if you\'ve given enough hints that I think we can imagine where you\'re going to take this. (there are a few words here and there that need a little adjustment... but we all do that... conscious rather than conscience, that sort of thing).

I believe the word you mean is conscience, not conscious! Ah, English!!

Another good chapter. That man can really hold a grudge! LOL I\'m a bit puzzled over a couple of words in your story but figure they just must be typos. (Not a flame) Thanks for sharing.