rate_review Reviews

wow, that was suprisingly good. i normally am not a fan of song fics but this fit very nicely, very angsty. I liked it, it did seem a little rough in spots and i would love to see an more elaborated, detailed version of this story, but this is a great start, that you should definatly finish....or not, because, who doesn\'t like a nonresolving ending every once in a while. seriously, very well done, sorry but i just couldn\'t resist adding my opinion.
The always erratic,
Nishi

I like it, but I\'m kind of confused by it. Just one thought. maybe put like a box of astericks (sp?) the little star thingies above the number 8 on the keyboard, around the lyrics. I was kind of getting confused by it. I reallyt do like the story though. Please don\'t let this be a one-shot.