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by Closet

person Reb Riddle
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!! LOVE IT!!LOVE IT!!LOVE IT!!LOVE IT!!LOVE IT!!LOVE IT!!LOVE IT!!LOVE IT!!LOVE IT!! ^__^ LOVVVVVVEEEEEEE IIIITTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Echo
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. A Vert Unique Veela mating ritual! ^_^ I just have one question ... if Harry couldn\'t take Draco\'s coat off for 5 days ... does that mean he couldn\'t use the bathroom for 5 day\'s. He\'d certainly be ripe for the picking... in more ways that one. :p Wouldn\'t mind a sequel with little veelets (baby veelas).
person Storm
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job, I thought it was an interesting, funny story that filled the challenge criteria perfectly. I laughed and was very entertained during it. I, for one, wouldn\'t mind seeing the Veela Rituals of Childbirth and seeing Harry \'knoked up the duff\' (I loved that part btw) so if you have a sequel in mind, you definitely have a reader for it. Again, Great job!!
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great!!!! so origenal for a draco-veela fic! though i wanna know what the \"veela rituals for childbirth\" are! sequal sequal sequal!!!
person cve
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Damn, that was good. A nice twist of the veela plot. I like, very much. I hope you will continue this...


person Luna
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I loved Malfoy not talking... and it all being due to law... and there\'s nothing better than \"and in fact, there was a little voice in the back of his head going
person Alexa
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Absolutely LOVED IT!!! You HAVE to write a sequel - the rituals for childbirth, and the progression of the pregnancy/s!!!
I\'ll keep an eye out for it.
person The doctors In
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is just adorable for sure. I can\'t stress the horrible feeling of having a authors note right in the story itself though. To have you mention the prostrate dear readers was such a undoing of the story. I can\'t imagine reading a Harry Potter book and having to read personal observations and feeling by the author put in at random, it\'s a real bummer.
person TeeDee
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this sooo much. Heh. Between Draco and Mione, poor Harry is going to have a very hard life. How I envy him! *Grins* Really, though, this story was beautiful. My fav. part, I think, is Draco saying they\'ll be the next Weasley family. That was just -tooooo- good! And Draco isn\'t the one to carry the babes, so he\'s one to talk! XD
person myniephoenix
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful answer to the challenge my friend!!!! wonderrful!!! i loved it!!!! one of my new fav creature fics!!!!!

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