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by Closet

person koki
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hate hermione she always gets involvedggggggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
person Chaos
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute twist on the Veela story. I loved the things Draco had to do~ and keeping him silent for the whole time was a brillant stroke of writing genius!
person Damia
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh lord! *wipes tears out of eyes* that was hillarious at the end! You should so write a sequel for this dealing with that! It was really good, the whole Veela ideas, the cute crup, everything! keep writing ^.^
person acr
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! Funny, and very in character.
person v v
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute story - was laughing through most of it
person Ali
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed your original and amusing take on the Veela theme, plus the last sentence just cracked me up. Thanks for a fun read.
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is my new favorite story as of right this second. Sure I only just finished reading it two seconds ago, but *still*. Best Veela!Draco OF ALL TIME!!! Hot, funny, HOT, entertaining, HAWWT and extremely original to boot. You rock! Props and sugar cookies to you, O Writer Extraordinaire.

PS- Somebody must have read their copy of \"Fantastic Beasts and Where To Find Them\" very well! Can\'t remember the last time somebody mentioned crups. Cute little Salazar! (teehee)
person singata
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just loved reading this!
more stories!! :-)
person Priss368
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I certainly hope there will be more to the saga of this Draco & Harry! The ending line of \"wait till you see the Veela childbirth rituals\" screams of a sequel! I loved the line of \"being the new Weasleys\"! That was hilarious! I look forward to reading more of your work! Priss
person Umi
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Auuwwweeee! It was the best, the best, the best, the best! And no, I don`t care to explain why... :D
Okay, so, first of all, Harry/Draco is my favourite pairing....just adorable! I mean, Harry is just hot and Draco is like the sexiest that ever lived, so togethert that makes them the hottest hotties ever!
Second... I love not-human fics... with the creature-thing going on... Just hot.. :D
Third... Your writing is great! The language is wonderful, very pleasant to read!
Fourth: The fic took place at school. I like the school-fics more than the ones that happen after school. Dunno why...
Fifth; I love one-shots! I get so pissed off when I have to wait for the next part and the next part and the next part...
So... as many reaons as the days in your fic, ha? :D
I just loved Draco in this fic. The way he almost became Harrys servant was just great! And the roses... how romantic! This is the Draco I love, the sweet, romantic, sexy, wild and just a little bit malfoyish blond Slytherin. Perfocto!
And then.. the ending... I just knew it was coming, I knew it would end with a comment like that! It was just so..Draco.. to say something like that! And I always think Harry should be the one carrying the children... :D
It would be great, if some wonderful day, perhaps years from now, you would write a sequal. Take a peak in their lives, maby ten years from now. How many children do they have? Where are the living? Are they different? Oh, oh, oh, I know! You could write a little ficcie where Harry is pregnant! :D This is just an idea, but I know someone else would like it too... :D
So, keep writing, this was excellent! And maby I will notice a sequal here some day... :D

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