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for Care To Explain?

by Closet

person thrnbrooke
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!!!! I wanna hear all about it! Please!
person Jolene
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was most excellent!! Will there be more? Two small errors 1. Draco gave Harry his cloak so he couldn\'t of walked away with bellowing 2 After Draco gave Harry the pup he picked up the siler tray that Harry hadn\'t noticed you said Draco again.
person Narcissa Black
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was awesome. Not so sure about eating the still beating heart, but what\'s a little squick, right? Will there be more?
person ashley
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh mah god. you must make a sequel. i alot of this out loud, and nearly died towards the end. nice smuttysmutsmut too!
~ashleigh
person LocalShadow
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Blink...Blink:: I LOVE YOU! Your my fav. for today ::Hugs the life out of author:: You made my day! please continue!
person LadyX
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tee hee hee. Loved it. You do realize that a sequel is a must I hope. Great fic I loved it. I dont seem to find very may good one-shot veela fics very often. I think they are just the kinda fic that need multiple chapters. But you managed to make one of those few awesome ones. If you do decide on a sequel with I dunno the childbirth rituals e-mail me when it comes out please? Oh guess what? you get cookies *hands over a batch*
person Amessis
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so much fun! I just loved it.
person emma
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey ya i liked this chapter but i was woundering is this the last chapter or are there going 2 be more?

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