rate_review Reviews

It is too much if I expect you to know the NAMES of the characters you write about? It\'s Voldemort. Not VoldeRmort - and since you misspelled several times (beginnning with your title!) I don\'t think it was a typo....

I like the premise of the story and am interested on where you\'re taking the readers. The writing is a bit disjointed and spelling/grammer should be checked more carefully. Plus, 6 chapters in and no sex? It better come soon and in a manner of writing that\'s better than what has been shown so far to keep my interest.

I like it so far. I want to see more.
Less unresolved sexual tension and more sex please.

Good start - looking forward to finding out more. You might want to have your story beta\'ed to catch some simple spelling errors, etc. Keep up the good work.