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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job Dark,
I\'m really interested now, but please add a few more paragraphs to your story, it\'s hard to read. If you need a betareader just send me the stuff via E-Mail.
And hurry up with the next chapter :)
I\'m really interested now, but please add a few more paragraphs to your story, it\'s hard to read. If you need a betareader just send me the stuff via E-Mail.
And hurry up with the next chapter :)
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good. I like the ideas and the flow of the story. Well... for the most part. It does need one thing; a beta. There are a lot of simple spelling mistakes like \"trunk\" and \"truck\" or \"crack\" and \"creak\" that spellcheck won\'t pick up.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fanfic looks great, I especially like how Snape is written *evil grin* I truly hate Harry, most of the time, however at the moment I did want to give him a hug... if he wasn\'t starting to smell a little as you say. *holds nose and gives him a one armed hug* Over all, wonderful! *eats fanfic*