rate_review Reviews

Reading these SS/HG fanfics, this by far is the one that leaves me hanging on the edge....not unlike Hermione. The \"good girl\" dying to slake her thirst with the \"bad boy\"---- priceless. And he has her without even trying...great job. I\'m hooked and awaiting the update

\"ready, oh so ready to offer her intimate knowledge of that sweet fruit of good and evil that hung low and pungent between his thighs.\" What a great line!! Just evokes all sorts of images that are none to pure!

Well, That was hot! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!

So far its fantastic I cant wait till you write more.

*fans self* Oh my... that was something to behold. I must say you have a stunning way with words. I like Snape\'s fuck-it-all attitude as he decides that he will have the delectable Miss Granger. As one reviewer once told me... \'I do so love a shameless Snape\'. As for you first lemon... let me just say... it was just the right amount of \'tart\'. Poweful imagery as well, it\'s interesting to see what is basically a PWP with such imginative, descriptive, language. Keep it up... I can hardly wait to see what the climax of your little tale will bring.

I can\'t wait to see what happens next!

First Lemony scene, you say? Dang. Yeah, that was good, that was very good. I especially liked that whole \'where the real snake of Slytherin is hidden\' part (I know it\'s not a direct quote, but I can\'t be fussed to hit the back button, copy it, move back to reviews page and retype the little that I had typed before that part. Sorry.) Seriously, great job. I\'ll have you know, I actually have passed over this story a few times, before deciding to take a chance with it. Now I\'m hooked.

Eagerly awaiting your next Update.
Zoltaire the Inscrutable

This story is fantastic. I really hope you continue with it.

For a first smut scene, you did a wonderful job. I was thinking as I read it that you even came up with some new and eventive descriptions for body parts and secretions. Also, I really liked your dream sequence of the Lioness and The Serpent. Keep doing what you\'re doing, and you\'ll have a very well written, and certainly sexy story.

For your first lemony scene - I have to say I am quite amazed. --- In a good way that is --- I thought it was excellant, and just perfect =p

I can\'t wait for your next chapter... sigh...