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for #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? ~ Part 1

by Ms_Figg

person aemilia
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok,i'm just being a pain in the ass about this, but the phrase ostendo versti translated comes out to be show true.which i mean, it does work. i'm in latin class and i was reading it and i was all like, 'SWEET!LATIN!' so yea, just little random thing.
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so much fun!!!
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Review Chapter 5.....

Good story so far, but you constantly misspell HogwartS..... It is not spelled HogwartZ.....
person Suklaanmurunen
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I have to admit that I finally got enough of courage to review your amazingly fantastic story, I have read this thorough so many times that its now my duty to review this. Hmmm, what I could say? This isn\'t just a mindless PWP story only with randy shagging scenes but so much more with extra ordinary plot, I liked to see what they\'re thinking and you carried the plot amazingly good forward. And by the way, Severus is really so fucking good sex-god!!! ;)
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*le sigh* Shame there\'s not really a yummy potions Master to teach...yah well yum is all I can really say at the moment
person sbrande
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved every minute of reading this great fic... Sometimes you have to get away from the mundane fics and have a good laugh...
Cheers and thanks for writing this... Off to read Part 2!!! Sonia
person Linda
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ms. Figg....great writing. You build your characters with such reality, they are well fleshed out. The sexual tension is extraordinary and your descriptions are awesome.
person dicey
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lady, you sure do have a way with words!! Sev=\"orgasmic express\" ALL ABOARD!!!! (I wanna ticket!!!) *whew* Your Sev is soooo ferally, virile and intensely SEXY *pants* *cartoon tongue hanging down LOW & eyeballs bugged out, etc.*
person dicey
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
atta girl, Hermione! I\'d like to transfigure that Weasel into a tapeworm for picking on her so much *sniggers*
person kat1441
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I decided to come back and relive the good old days instead. It occured to me that I had never reviewed before I reviewed that \"other\" episode of the series. I picked this chapter because it is the sexiest blowjob scene I\'ve ever seen written. Particulary, I think, because he\'d never experienced it either. I don\'t know. Whatever it was, I wish I could write like that!

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