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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!! I WANT TO CHAIN YOU IN THE BASEMENT AND MAKE YOU WRITE ALL DAY! (J/K) I love this fic and can\'t wait for more!
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very interesting. How did Grindelwald find Tom Riddle in a Muggle orphanage at the age of 6?
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, MUST CONTINUE FIC! LOVE THE SOUTHPARK REFERENCE. Have you considered \"Fractured Reality\" for a title? The only reason I ask is because, if you\'re going to follow up on NotQuiteSoEvilTeenager!Tom, I think that\'s a good title.
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have a very good start to an actual plot. Yay! Okay, you need to have a title. People will shy away from a fic that seems like it doesn\'t have the author\'s attentiion. Also, some typos. Keep going.