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person Larissa
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa*fans herself frantically*just...whoa
person firewall
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very nice blend of sensitive and rough sex. I laughed out loud at Dumbledore.
person firewall
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lord Voldemort?....I enjoy your reviews almost as much as this story. LOL Enjoy your swimsuit issues.
person Catpower
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww! All that tough talk and what Sevvie really wants is to be kissed all over - to be shown gentleness, love and affection! Well, he\'s certainly lickable enough for it to be a pleasure to oblige - and he thought that would be the biggest deal! He even thought that a week of being shagged by him at Snape Manor was a THREAT! LMAO! I\'m sure H is up for it.

I really loved the line, \"Completely naked, and pacing through his rooms like a big cat\". What a great way to start a paragraph - or even a novel, in fact.

Also liked Hermione shaking her wand when her lumos spell was failing - like shaking up the battery in a torch. LOL.

All that scary stuff in the dark was exciting and I\'ve never read a sex scene like that before. This story is so great. Keep writing and thanks for your efforts so far.
person JTBJAB
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Take me, Severus, *pout* damn it! Hermione gets all the fun!
person JW
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 22 - so cute! Hmm, they should keep a gallon of purple stuff by the nightstand, along with that salve. Yes, Salazar would be very proud!!
person luvssnape
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am happy you brought love into this last chapter. Severus deserves so much for his sacrifices.
person Rd Writing Hood
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh...Albus is a pervert...Albus is a pervert...LOL

Love it.

Red
person JW
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 21 - hot! Warped person that I am, I really liked the \"like a carriage return\" line. What stamina that Severus has! Good thing there are lots of lemons in the orchard..... Thanks for posting!
person applebee
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To quote Paris Hilton \'That\'s Hot\'. Update soon:)

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