rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

You cover a lot of backstory in the prologue, and I must say that I was a bit confused when I read it. Perhaps you might re-read the chapters before you post them... there are some missed and misused words in sentences which make them a bit difficult to understand. Otherwise, I think your set-up is intriguing. This sort of bleak future isn\'t beyond the realm of possibility.

I like it so far. Can\'t wait to see what happens next. Poor Sev, no memory and an angry Hemione!

i like your story please write more and update soon please in till then later

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