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for My Fallen Angel

by crimsonvipera

person absinthe
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this looks very good so far, keep it up. One thing though, you put drought in relation to a potion, drought is a severe water shortage, the word you want is draught, as in 'sleeping draught'. Your spell check won't catch it because it is still a real word.
person pheonixelemental
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm slightly confused about the end, but i think some more chapters *hinthintnudgenudge* would help. ttyl
person K.C.
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*goes up an down and looks at you with narrowed eyes* You have to continue... you listen? Update as soon as possible... Don't bother in sleeping... just write... understand? And I won't listen to complains... so... sit down... and WRITE!!!!
*smiles brightly* I love your story... XD
person Tamura
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so far so good. keep up the good work
person Sophia
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is quite interesting and I can't wait to see how everyone reacts when they see Harry's new form. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!I love it!
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!I love it!
person Kordula
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please say you will finish this.
It's interesting and I really want to
see what happens next.
person QoH
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is good so far. i hope you cintinue.
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this fic! Please write more!

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