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by tas

person LadyVaughan
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I really love it. It\'s a great story and a well written one at that. I couldn\'t stop reading it once I found it. Please update soon also could you send me the name\'s or link\'s of the other story\'s like this? I would really like to read them as well. Please update as sson as you can. I can\'t wait for more. Love it. update soon.

~LadyVaughan.
person Missi
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. I can\'t wait for the next update!!
person FranB
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Tas,
I just love your story. Wonderfull chapter. Is a Vanteera a creation of yourself or is it a magical being already existing?

FranB
person jess
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it\'s sweet altho sev wasn\'t nessasaraly in the right when harry was asleep, but owell
person sbkar
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good to see you haven\'t abandoned this story!
person LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great job!
I love how everything has turned out for our harry :D

will they...consummate their relationship soon?? (blush)
hehe
well, update as SOON AS YOU CAN!!
yea, life can keep us pretty busy :/
but if you write for only 10 minutes a day, you can get the next chapter out soon :D
hoping to see an update sooN!!
luvs!
person woof
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate it when life interferes with my reading!! Great chapter!!!!!!!!
person Shadow Bandit
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. I really like the relationship between Dudley and Harry and Harry and Draco. Update soon and thanks for sharing.
person fireagnle
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, and hope that you update soon!! Just thought that you should know that a shotgun bullet is just not one bullet, but several pellets. At the range of about 4 feet the impact can blow of about 1/4 of a person\'s skull. At about, I think, 18 feet the pellets start to seperate and you get a several bruises from where they are bouncing around in the chest, or where ever. When a person gets shot by a shotgun, it is usually fatal. As the interal bleeding and damage to the major organs are extensive. You might want to change from Harry being shot by a shotgun to a normal gun. Just a segestion.
person foxygirl
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One word... hott! Update soon please.

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