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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Didn\'t expect Dumbledore to be so hands-on, nor Snape to tease so right in front of him. Next chapter please!
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea, I\'m suprised i never thought of it myself before this but alas I will not steal the idea from you of course.
I think Harry gave into the idea too easily. I mean sure he was up to anything but doesn\'t he hate Snape from the beginning, I would imagine so since you had him glaring at Snape when he walked in for the meeting. I may be wrong but that\'s just my opinion.
Anyways, this is not meant as a flame. I did enjoy this first chapter and I hope you update soon I want to see what happens! Keep up the good work, and good luck!
Jesslynne
I think Harry gave into the idea too easily. I mean sure he was up to anything but doesn\'t he hate Snape from the beginning, I would imagine so since you had him glaring at Snape when he walked in for the meeting. I may be wrong but that\'s just my opinion.
Anyways, this is not meant as a flame. I did enjoy this first chapter and I hope you update soon I want to see what happens! Keep up the good work, and good luck!
Jesslynne
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept but the diaglogue was a bit distrubing even for those three...
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting begining.
I agree heartily with Dumbledore, Harry acted on that too rashly. He should have waited till he knew just what was being asked of him.
I can\'t wait for the BDSM parts though. I love BDSM!!!
Not very many stories have HP/SS bdsm and in my opinion those are the best.
Please update soon.
I agree heartily with Dumbledore, Harry acted on that too rashly. He should have waited till he knew just what was being asked of him.
I can\'t wait for the BDSM parts though. I love BDSM!!!
Not very many stories have HP/SS bdsm and in my opinion those are the best.
Please update soon.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the idea for the story. You\'ve nailed Harry\'s reaction to the somewhat enthusiastic idea of being a pet, to of all people, Snape.
I\'d love that you\'d develop the story more to make it flow better and not be so jumpy.
Great ideas you have, just organising them somewhat would make this absolutely terrific.
Can\'t wait to read more.
I\'d love that you\'d develop the story more to make it flow better and not be so jumpy.
Great ideas you have, just organising them somewhat would make this absolutely terrific.
Can\'t wait to read more.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! Nice start!
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon.... more detail if you please..
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh! me likey!
please update soon!
pet harry is a wonderful plot...why didnt I think of it?!
;)
happy update:D
please update soon!
pet harry is a wonderful plot...why didnt I think of it?!
;)
happy update:D
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this will be an interesting fic to read. I like the idea
I just hope you don\'t make Severus a complete bastard.
have fun writing.
-Mashell
I just hope you don\'t make Severus a complete bastard.
have fun writing.
-Mashell
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea... but i do think Harry gave in a little easy.