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October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I cannot wait for another chapter. It is getting better and better with each post! Hope to see an update soon! ^_^
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is gonna be good go on proove me right
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I thought the 1st chapter was well written, and had enough individuality in it to keep it\'s head above the usually \'ho hum, Snape and/or Granger hit by love and/or lust magic\'. 2nd chapter was more like you were treading water, worrying we would understand the differences in the spells, but I did love the scene between the boys at the end. This chapter has been a huge leap forward, and I\'m really looking forward to the next chapter.
I had been a little worried that they both seemed a little too ready to throw themselves at each other when they seemed to have had little interaction over the preceding weeks, but then I thought \'hormonally charged young woman who knows what she wants, previously repressed man under influence of magic with a young woman giving him the green light\' and realised that they may need to get some of the UST out of the way before they can have a decent conversation :)
I had been a little worried that they both seemed a little too ready to throw themselves at each other when they seemed to have had little interaction over the preceding weeks, but then I thought \'hormonally charged young woman who knows what she wants, previously repressed man under influence of magic with a young woman giving him the green light\' and realised that they may need to get some of the UST out of the way before they can have a decent conversation :)
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m reading your story and eagerly awaiting the next update, especially since you were so evil and left us hanging on a lemon cliff.
Keep up the good work.
Toodles.
Keep up the good work.
Toodles.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying the humour in some of the repartee...I loved Harry and Ron\'s comments regarding them having an intelligent conversation. Hahahaha. Now don\'t forget you are writing a story and post another chapter soon.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so good its so sweet and cute! please continue soon
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1. Great beginning! Your plot bunny may not be completely original, but I don\'t remember seeing one exactly like this. I like the way it happened due to Ron trying to hex Harry. I\'m looking forward to seeing where the story goes. As for the song, I absolutely love it - the video as well. My teenage daughter, who is a huge fan of both HIM and The Rasmus, introduced me to the song, which led to checking out Apocalyptica\'s other music too. I especially love all the Metallica covers. Anyway, can\'t wait for more of your story!