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for Indago:Reborn

by lojenn

person JJ
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A lot of action in that chapter. But it also makes me sad. Your characters have become real to me and when they hurt, it makes me feel a little bad too. Draco has some points. Harry has his instincts. Why do I think Harry is going to hurt a lot more before this story is done?
person anonymous
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED THIS UPDATE!!!!!! I didn't see it posted, and so finally i checked!!!! Very good chapter, i wondered when Draco was going to reinstate his dominance. I hope that Lucius stops interfering, but knowing him he won't, hell if i were Harry, i would have done a lot worse to that man, lol. Please update soon.
person Frikin Carefree
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh Somebodies in Trouble...
person Akusaa
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh!

*breathes in*

Wow.

CANNOT wait for update! Draco is so scary *cough*sexy*cough* when he is angry *grin*
person WretchedScar
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOWWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW! That was a furking AWESOME Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!! Please update fast!!! I can't stand this! yeesh!!!!
person red
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
couldn't harry just claim he was protecting the bebe? *pouts* i would have laughed if he had kicked lucius' arse. ^.- great chap, i like all the action.
person doesitmatter
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...draco is an ass...but I LOVE THE STORY SO UPDATE SOON!
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH I want to hit Lucius AND Draco SSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOO badly!!!!!!!! I am just sick and tired of that man bad mouthing Harry and Draco doing NOTHING because of it.....

But *deep breath* I hope a happy end will occur just like in the original (and Lucius dies, that would be good too ^^). But wonderful chapter and story darling, I've been watching it for quite sometime both here and on TopDraco_Bottom Harry, its a favorite ^^.

And Harry, sweet Harry he's just getting the short end of all of this right now, it wouldn't be too much if Haryr got a little pay back would it? (Well, you are the writer so I'll leave that to you). Again fantastic story I only wish that you never give up on this story.

BSG
person Storm
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! an update and what an update it was. I had shivers. Not that Lucius didn't deserve something but damn, a mad Draco is a... Well a mad Draco! Great job and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Great job
person elecktra
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! That was great!!! Go Harry!!! But sad he had to get yelled at by Draco!! That was one of your best chapters to me!! I sooo can't wait to find out what happens next!!!! Update ASAP!!!

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